While building all the personas and maps for Muir Woods Summer Solstice mini-site, I started to get a better idea of how to summarize the experience for the largest (expected) audience for the site. I've been playing with these phrases, trying to make them into shorter and more precise titles. I'm also struggling to integrate some newer information about my particular event, which is that the event occurs on Muir Beach, and is centered around where Redwood Creek leaves Muir Woods and meets the sea.
There comes a point when brevity is not necessarily wit, nor helpful for that matter. Here is a list of proposed titles/synopses for the MWSS mini-site:
EXPERIENCE FOR YOURSELF THE TIMELESS WONDER OF THE SUMMER SOLSTICE AT MUIR BEACH.
THE LONGEST DAY OF THE YEAR IS ALSO THE MOST EXTRAORDINARY: EXPERIENCE THE SUMMER SOLSTICE AT MUIR BEACH.
SUMMER SOLSTICE AT MUIR BEACH: RE-LIVE THE TRADITIONS OF TRIBES AND CENTURIES LONG FORGOTTEN.
DAYLIGHT TAKES ITS LAST STAND AGAINST THE NIGHT: EXPERIENCE SUMMER SOLSTICE AT MUIR BEACH.
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